Book Blurb

I have had a really constructive day today! This morning I wrote some ideas for my book description and with my proof-reading mum's helpful input, I have now re-edited and come up with something half decent...I think! Here it is:

When Jess steals a glance at a gorgeous guy in a Manchester nightclub, little does she realise how he is going to change her life…or should that be death? Yet, the vampire clan could never have predicted what they were taking on. With Luke pronounced ‘off-limits’ and the blood of a vampire simmering in Jess’s body, can she forget the love of her life and move on? If not, she will risk exposing the entire Northern vampire clan to untold dangers, in order to live her life the way she wants.

Can Jess be sure that Luke is all he appears to be? Will she succumb to the attraction she desperately tries not to feel for Daniel?  And why does she still crave a packet of crisps more than a tasty teenage boy’s blood?

Let me know what you think of it...would it make you want to buy?